It's a good map, but I have some comments about things to improve.

This looks like you should be able to enter it, but you can't.

You allow the player to go out the window, but there's no reason to and if you step on the big desert sector you get squished.

It's too difficult to see the opening.
Also, I think you should reduce the number of Polymer lights, especially in the second half of the map. My frame rate was about 7 from the third screenshot to the end of the level.
My only other criticism is that there doesn't seem to be much point in requiring DP for the map. As far as I can tell, it would play perfectly fine without DP (as long as you made the checkpoint sprites etc. invisible).